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admin
07-05-2007, 02:41 PM
We announce “the best story” competition. :writing:
Terms: within a month you post your stories in this section, stories must not be long, they must be informative and interesting!
At the end of the month, we announce voting. Story that gets the maximum number of votes will be drawn and posted on site SheAniMale.com and ours board!
Good luck! :)

alital
07-06-2007, 09:17 AM
Hi. I'm new here, and I'm not sure what you mean by informative, can you elaborate?? I only write fiction and I use Final Draft. Is that OK?

Asphyxia8489
07-06-2007, 04:30 PM
By Informative he means.
"She was very pretty with a big dick"
should be more like this
"She was standing above be, her long red hair was just covering her left breast, she was smiling at me with a massive hard on"

Kinda like that I guess :)

Asphyxia8489
07-09-2007, 01:19 PM
Here is a quickie I just pulled out of my ass last night

SheAniMale Contest.
Story name: My first trip to Thailand

After a very long flight to Thailand from England I was exhausted! While going through Customs I was stopped by a fairly tall red headed female with green eyes and huge breasts. She was dressed in an Air stewardess’s uniform and it turned out she was member of the Airport staff, she asked me if I could come with her to the back room to answer some questions. Too tired to argue, I agreed and followed her, A few questions later I was taken to what seemed to be a prison cell. It all happened too fast for me to get a grip on what was happening.
An hour or so later the Red headed stewardess came back in and asked me if I wanted to get out. Naturally I said yes, she then said that if I wanted to get out I’d have to do her a favour. Fearing the worst of what would happen if I said no I just said “Yes, I’ll do anything”
She opened the cell door and slammed me against the wall, she was very strong for a girl and I couldn’t overpower her even if it wasn’t for the handcuffs. She ripped my shirt open and started with some tongue play on my nipples, I got a hard on almost instantly, she looked up with her beautiful green eyes and deep red lips and smiled as she undone my zip and pulled out my hard penis. After the best blowjob I’d ever had I came and fell on the floor, I looked up at her and realised that she also had a hard on! I was shocked and very turned on as the whole point of my trip to Thailand was to hook up with a beautiful ladyboy like Areeya. She then dragged me across the floor and slammed me onto the small bed on the other side of the room. She pulled down my pants and lifted up her skirt just enough so that her Penis was sticking out hard but still partially covered by her skirt. She had a small slit cut in her tights so that her penis could come out without her having to get naked. She unbuttoned her stewardess blouse and forced one of her breasts into my face and said “Suck this and play with my dick!” So I started to play with her penis while sucking her huge breasts. After a few minutes she pushed me over and slammed her massive penis into my ass. I was gripping onto the cell bars while she was pounding me then after a huge climax we both came together. She stood back, tidied up her hair, buttoned up her blouse and went to walk out, before she got to the door she said, “You’re free to go”.
I put my clothes back on and ran out in a confused panic, grabbed my suitcase and just as I got to the airport exit and tall black female security officer grabbed me, smiled, and said “you know the drill, follow me”.
The end
Well everyone, what do you think? Not too shabby for a first attempt done in 15 minutes just before bed at 1:45AM
I may upload a revised version when I’ve got some time, I didn’t clean up any text or sort out the grammar so you’ll have to get by with what’s there.

zhantarb
07-09-2007, 01:47 PM
Pretty good job, especially for doing it in a rather short amount of time. Definitely sounds like a story worthy of a SheAniMale rendition.

Lola
07-09-2007, 09:51 PM
Amazing... Vegetunks, you have a talent :letter:

Asphyxia8489
07-10-2007, 10:13 AM
Hehe, Why thankyou everyone. As much as i'd love to get this SheAniMale-ifyed I think I may be exempt from the compotition because of my Moderator status.

Meh regardless or not, it was fun to write.

bartz
07-10-2007, 09:55 PM
My biggest complaint is the grammatical mistakes found in that piece. Yeah, I'm a bit of a stickler when it comes to things like that. I think that if you used proper grammar it would be a much more enjoyable read. I hate writing that has such good potential but no one knows about it because their grammar is atrocious.

Other than that, yes, I liked the story.

ZingerIX
07-10-2007, 10:55 PM
It was good story by all measures. Thanks for sharing.

Asphyxia8489
07-11-2007, 10:47 AM
Well just so everyone knows i'm currently building four websites and my deadline for all four is friday! so i've not go much time to go back and clean up the grammar

Hugan
07-12-2007, 06:08 AM
Admin- what constitutes "not long"? I'd hate to go overboard, but I tend to get rather indepth with my descriptions.

Asphyxia8489
07-12-2007, 11:25 AM
My Story is probably just on the not long section.

toshi
07-15-2007, 05:17 PM
Admin- what constitutes "not long"? I'd hate to go overboard, but I tend to get rather indepth with my descriptions.

like the rest of the stories you see
http://fhg.sheanimale.com/fhg/1429/010_Trick_or_Treat/34813/
not long = to the point
hugan
write that
indepth = boring -_-

Asphyxia8489
07-15-2007, 11:56 PM
like the rest of the stories you see
http://fhg.sheanimale.com/fhg/1429/010_Trick_or_Treat/34813/
not long = to the point
hugan
write that
indepth = boring -_-
Goes back to my Halloween zip SheAniMale file

Animelover
07-17-2007, 03:43 AM
Well here goes my first post on this forums. Hope its not to long?

SheAniMale Contest.
Story name: A day at the zoo.

Well, my first day on the job, and I got stuck on elephants with Jessie, the largest breasted woman I had ever seen. Well as I walked out through the door to slowly meet the elephants, she asked about what made me want to work in a zoo. So I told her “believe it or not Med. School just wasn’t what I wanted, and after dropping out here I am”. She looked me in the eyes and told me that was a shame, and that doctors are her kind of people. With her long blonde hair glistening in the bright sunlight I realized how attractive she was. After cleaning the pen, and feeding them all, it was finally eleven o’clock. We were supposed to do a show, informing the guests all about Maggie and her new baby boy Geoff. During the show it seemed that she just kept emphasizing how big and strong the trunk is and how it just flows so elegantly. After the show was done and the people had left we went to the shed to clean up again. I had grabbed the broom and went out to sweep, before I had even walked five feet, she asked for my help. So I walked back to the shed put down the broom and asked what was wrong? Jessie asked, “You’ve had doctor training right?” Yeah I said why? She responds, “Could you help me with my problem?” “I don’t see why not,” I told her. So she begins to strip down to nothing but a pink frilly bra and a matching thong. When I quickly had a surprise down under I blushed and she giggled playfully, with her succulent breasts bouncing lovely. She asked me to kneel so she could show me the problem. Once I did that she takes off her thong only to reveal a large meaty cock! Mouth a gape in shock; she shoves her meat in my mouth, immediately I suck like I have drinking to stay alive. Once she had cum, she quickly withdrew her cock and flipped me over tearing down my pants and briefs. With a sharp scream of pain I realized her cock was in my virgin ass. She quickly comforts me by telling me “Shush, everything is going to be alright just relax and it won’t hurt.” Shortly after her warm load was in my ass, I had to put my cock in her, so we traded spots and when I was fucking her brains out I had a huge load of cum in her ass, and almost immediately she responded with a load on my face. After getting dressed again I realize I was just like a kid again never wanting to leave the zoo.

ZingerIX
07-17-2007, 04:39 AM
Very descriptive lead in... a little short on the action. But all in all, a very entertaining story. Thanks for sharing.

Asphyxia8489
07-17-2007, 11:15 AM
Indeed very good, here we have it! The second person to enter the compitition!

AnimeGod
07-18-2007, 11:36 AM
IS this still open?

Asphyxia8489
07-18-2007, 11:54 AM
Yeah, it's open untill this thread is closed

AnimeGod
07-18-2007, 12:04 PM
Ahhh i may post somthing when i get an idea :P

ZingerIX
07-18-2007, 06:30 PM
Hope you all enjoy reading this as much as I enjoyed writing it for you...

After a long week at work, I was looking forward to a relaxing and fun weekend with my wife for our anniversary. When I arrived home, one of her friends I've never met before was over for dinner. I figured I could tolerate looking at this knock-out all through dinner until I could get my wife alone. After dinner my wife and her friend got comfy on the couch and when I walked in they were already kissing and rubbing their breasts. Their "come-hither" looks were obvious enough to have me in the middle in no time. I can never resist eating my wife's pussy, and I decided to show off a bit for our guest. While I was deep in my wife's crotch and she was breathing heavy, our guest slipped in behind me and started to suck my hard cock. Within a few minutes she was stroking me and licking my ass. I thought I was going to burst until she stopped abruptly. When I glanced up at my wife she had a big grin and was starring at our guest. I started to feel a pressure on my ass, thinking it was her finger I just relaxed, since my wife had done this before during blowjobs. As i looked back, she whispered for me to just relax, and within a few seconds I was pushed into my wife's lap and I had this woman's 8 inch cock in my ass. If I hadn't been so surprised I would have stopped, but the shock and the pleasure were amazing. I couldn't believe I was getting fucked in the ass by a shemale, but I couldn't deny the magnificent sensation. I felt as if I touched my cock I would explode. She continued to fuck my ass and I tried with all my might to keep eating pussy, to little avail. She pumped fast and deep for several minutes. Then she pulled out and blew her load all over my back and ass. Well, after all that, I had to fuck somebody. So I rolled my wife over and I fucked her while she sucked our new friend's cock. Within a few minutes all three of us were cumming all over each other. When we all collapsed on the couch, my wife had the biggest grin. And with a kiss, she said " Happy Anniversary, Darling."

AnimeGod
07-18-2007, 10:53 PM
Hahahaha thats a well good one like somthing youd find in a porn mag or somthing lol

Asphyxia8489
07-19-2007, 04:19 PM
That was FUCKING intense dude!!!!! WOW! ZingerIX If I were making the rules youd be the winner. ADMIN READ THIS! HE ROCKS

Little Bee
07-19-2007, 04:35 PM
I would like to see this story in the pictures, but still 2 weeks to the beginning of voting. I hope this story will win!

Good Luck ZingerIX !

Asphyxia8489
07-19-2007, 04:47 PM
Damn streight! :)

Dilan
07-23-2007, 05:13 PM
I like stories of all writers, I don't know who will win...
Good luck all ;)

dhenshaw
08-03-2007, 05:46 AM
I tried Vegetunk’s trick of pulling something out of my ass, but apparently my ass only produces one thing. But what the heck, this seems like a forgiving group. So here’s my attempt. I call it:


HELL HATH

“Good morning, sleepy-head.”

Brad didn’t recognize the voice, but he knew the heavy breathing and husky voice of a woman who wanted to get fucked.

“Good…” he started, and then stopped.

It wasn’t morning. It was pitch black outside and he didn’t have a clue where he was. He was also having a hell of a time trying to roll over.

“I seem to be all tangled up,” he said.

“You’re fine, sweetie. Just relax.”

His wits had returned enough that he saw why he couldn’t move. His wrists were strapped to the ends of a four-foot long foam-padded tube with another strap around his waist and attached to the middle of the tube.

The bed was soft enough that it wasn’t all that uncomfortable, but he felt silly as hell. The damn thing made his butt stick up in the air and his face press down into the pillows.

“Kinky,” he said, giving her his best leer. “This gizmo of yours is kind of tricky,” he added, seeing if there was any way to get out of it.

“I’m glad you like it,” she said.

There was a disconcerting smugness in her voice.

“I don’t think we’ll be able to do much with it strapped on like this, though. Undo me and we’ll get naked. Then I’ll help you strap me in in a better way.”

“No, I don’t think so,” she said, and gave a leer that put his to shame. “I have a better plan.”

“First I’m going to strip. Then I’m going to use your mouth…” she ran a finger over his lips, “then I’ll pull your pants down and fuck the shit out of you.”

“Should I pretend I’m resisting?” Brad laughed.

His laugh was answered by another. It was a long, nasty laugh, and it was from a voice he did recognize.

“Cindy,” Brad gasped.

Cindy, the girl he’d just dumped, had been sitting in an easy chair at the foot of the bed the entire time.

“You missed my strip,” the other girl said, “so let’s go to the part where I use your mouth.”

Strong fingers forced his mouth open, and a huge cock was down his throat before he got a good look at it.

Cindy’s laughter filled the room as the she-male forced his head all the way down.

Asphyxia8489
08-03-2007, 10:57 AM
Hmm, Not bad. I like all the "dark" storys. You really need to continue it out a bit though, it kinda stops all of a sudden and.. well.. VEGETUNKS WANTS TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!! lol

WHOAMI
08-03-2007, 06:49 PM
nice work vegatunks...thumb up for u!

dhenshaw
08-04-2007, 05:54 AM
Hmm, Not bad. I like all the "dark" storys. You really need to continue it out a bit though, it kinda stops all of a sudden and.. well.. VEGETUNKS WANTS TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!! lol

Okay


HELL HATH (Pt. 2)

“Make him gag, Shauna. Choke the bastard,” Cindy yelled.

“I’m making him suck my dick and you got to see it,” the she-male said. “That was our deal.”

“You said you’d screw him in the butt too,” Cindy said.

“Nothing on Earth’s going to keep me off his tight virgin ass. Now why don’t you run along and let me have my fun?”

“Yeah, I suppose you’re right. The last thing I want to do is rush you. Bye Brad. Have fun.”

He could still hear her nasty laugh after the door closed behind her.

“Forget her,” Shauna said to the man nestled in her lap.

Brad wasn’t the first straight guy she’d had at her mercy. In fact, gay men were the only ones who didn’t come panting after her whenever she crooked a finger. She was one hot she-male, and she knew it.

For Brad it was a different story. He’d never been so helpless, and ever having a dick in his mouth was unthinkable. The contraption imprisoning him made it impossible to raise his head and the soft flesh of her inner thighs kept him from turning it.

“It’ll be a little strange at first,” Shauna cooed.

His legs were the only part of his body he could move and he suddenly started kicking them wildly. Her dick had been throbbing in his mouth for some time, but now it was getting bigger.

One shoe came off as his feet fought for purchase. The head of her cock was expanding into his throat and it was all he could do to keep from gagging.

“But we can’t let a mouth as pretty as yours go to waste.”

Brad’s entire body convulsed as he gagged. As if a switch had been flipped, her cock went rock hard and shot down his throat. He gagged again, then again.

“I’m sorry, baby, but that feels so nice,” Shauna said, hands cupping his face and lifting him up the impaling cock. “Use your lips and watch those teeth so I don’t have to use your throat.”

Eyes watering and nose dripping, Brad sealed his lips around her cock. She used her hips to thrust her dick in and out of his mouth, holding his head up all the while.

“Oh yes, baby. That feels wonderful.”

She was pumping faster, the hands holding his face like a vise. Impossible as it seemed, her cock was getting even larger.

“Suck me dry,” she growled, voice gravelly with lust. “Swallow every drop.”

Hot spume exploded in his mouth. He obediently swallowed.

“Wow. I never meant to cum that fast,” Shauna said. “That mouth of yours is pure magic, sweetie.”

“Thanks,” he croaked.

He was instantly horrified that he’d thanked her. Was he that desperate for approval that he’d thank someone after that?

“Let me go,” he said.

“Hang on, hon. I’ll be ready for another round in no time.”

“You got what you wanted, now let…”

She covered his mouth with her hand, cutting off the rest.

“Shhhh, it won’t be long. I promise,” she said.

Hand still clamped over his mouth she pulled his face into her ample breasts. Soft smothering flesh made getting even the slightest bit of air a battle. Twisting and bucking he fought for air while she calmly twirled his hair around her finger.

Panic had replaced desperation when she said, “I told you I’d be ready again quickly. All your squirming has really turned me on.”

“Couldn’t … (gasp)…couldn’t…”

“Don’t be a baby,” Shauna cut him off. “Let’s get these pants off, shall we?”

“No, please.”

“Don’t worry. I’ll be gentle.”

She moved around, kneeling between his legs, and reached around his waist. She undid his belt, unhooked the top of his pants and pulled down the zipper.

Shauna liked to call this part “the unveiling.” It was her favorite part and the longer it took, the better it was. The first sight of a virgin ass she was about to take was thrilling enough, but the way guys squirmed as she slowly pulled their pants down was enough to make her thumping heart jump out of her chest.

Brad wasn’t thinking having his butt sticking up was just silly any more. He was exposed in the most humiliating way and helpless to do anything about it.

Her fingers slid under the waistband of his underpants, her hands went down, one cupping his balls and the other holding his dick.

Goosebumps erupted all up and down his arms. Her expert hands were stroking him into excitement.

“Feels good, huh?” she said.

“No,” he said, the lie filling her hand.

“Do you want me to stop?”

“Yes,” he said, in a weak squeak.

Brad squirmed in her grasp, wondering how she’d gotten him so close to cumming so quickly.

“Okay,” she said, releasing him.

She had stopped at the exact moment of no return. Cum had already started its explosive journey, but without the final push only a few drops trickled out.

“Let’s get these pants the rest of the way down.”

Brad moaned. She was pulling his pants down with agonizing slowness as his full erection waved uselessly in the air.

“You have a beautiful ass,” Shauna sighed, fingers lightly stroking the cheeks and tracing a line down his crack.

Brad’s entire body twitched when the head of her massive cock pressed against his anus.

“Oh my god, wait,” he cried when she forced its head inside. “You’re too big, I can’t take it.”

“You have to relax, honey. It’ll hurt if you don’t relax.”

She had her arms around his chest, breasts pressed against his back. She wasn’t guiding her cock anymore. It was held in place by the ass-hole tightly stretched around its head.

Her hips made tiny thrusts as she snuggled her cheek against his back.

“Almost there, almost there,” she kept repeating, going a little deeper every time.

The thickest part of her cock forced him to cry out shamelessly.

“Maybe I should use a little more lube,” Shauna said. “I’ll be right back.”

She made like she was pulling out, but as soon as she felt him relax she plunged the entire length of her cock into him.

He made the same funny sounding gasp they all did.

“See, I told you it wouldn’t be so bad if you relaxed,” Shauna said.

Resignation filled Brad as Shauna’s cock kept slamming into him. He’d lost his erection, and could feel his prick and balls flopping around uselessly, but he was getting a perverse feeling of pleasure from how much she was enjoying him. His ass-hole burned, but the warmth of her body pressing down on him made up for it.

“I’m getting close,” she said in a husky whisper.

Her hands were suddenly back on his cock and balls, working feverishly.

“I’m cumming,” she cried, and to Brad’s amazement, so was he.

dhenshaw
08-04-2007, 06:51 AM
Note to self: Figure out what they want before you spew out a bunch of words.

These are stories that can be turned into short cartoons we’re aiming at, huh?

Does anyone know where I left my brain? I could have sworn I had it with me a few days ago.


Give me one more chance, PLEEEESE.



BLUE EYES CRYING

“Do you want to see my tattoo?”

He wanted to see her everything. From the auburn hair framing her pixie face to the dainty feet in red high heels. He especially wanted to see the things between.

She’d let him play with her tits and even guided his hands to the round firmness of her ass, but his eyes lusted for what his hands had explored. .

“Let’s get a room,” she’d said when he tried to slide his hand up her inner thigh.

Now he was sitting on the bed at some no-tell-motel, with a vision of loveliness asking:

“Do you want to see my tattoo?”

“Yes,” he said.

She inched her skirt down until it was no longer holding her blouse in. Then she gathered the bottom of her blouse in her fingers and started to lift it.

Her tattoo was apparently somewhere between her navel and her pussy.

“Wow,” he said, and he meant it.

Her tattoo was an impossibly colored pair of eyes. Long black eyelashes swept out under purple eye shadow, and the irises were an incredibly deep blue. A hint of wetness at the bottom made it seem as if they’d been crying.

“That’s beautiful,” he said after a long pause.

“Look closer,” she said as her skirt dropped to the floor.

He did. Down on his knees in front of her, he saw the irises were concentric circles, like those cartoon hypnosis things, and some of the rings were green, yellow, and red.

They seemed to be changing as he watched, so he drew closer until something bumped into his lips.

“Open your mouth,” she said.

Something slid into his mouth when he opened it, but he was able to get closer to those wonderful eyes.

“Look deep into my eyes,” she said.

She was holding his head, sliding her cock in and out of his mouth as he kneeled, memorized by the eyes on her lower belly.

Every moment he spent lost in those eyes put him deeper into her spell. She’d sit on his face later, and have him lick the inside of her ass. She’d have him lie face down with his legs spread after that, and have a good time fucking him. But for now she was happy having him suck her cock as he watched her BLUE EYES CRYING.

dhenshaw
08-05-2007, 09:09 PM
It was almost closing time, but the girls hadn’t gotten a damn bit prettier.

The dyke at the end of the bar still looked like a cellulite storage facility and the skinny one next to her like the winner of a zit-popping contest.

“Last call,” the hotel’s bartender said.

“Make it a double,” I answered. “Better yet, make it two doubles.”

Both shots splashed over my already numb lips. It was obvious I wasn’t going to get laid tonight, now the only question was if I’d be able to get up to my room without crawling.

It didn’t matter. This was my last night in ‘Frisco. Tomorrow I’d be back in the booming metropolis of Center Line, Michigan where I was one of those pillar-of-the-community types.

“Shit,” I muttered.

The bartender looked.

“Michigan,” I said, raising the last of my drink. “America’s first line of defense from Canada” and downed it.

“If I was your friend, I wouldn’t let you drive,” a sexy voice said.

The voice was coming from my left, but it took a while to get my eyes over there. When they finally did I found the nicest set of boobs I’d ever seen. They were in a dress cut so low she must have been using her nipples to keep it up.

“Like what you see?” the sexy voice said.

The voice was coming from somewhere above those breasts, but I couldn’t lift my head.

Her finger pressed on the back of my head and my face plopped into her soft cleavage.

“Hey,” barked the bartender.

I jerked up, looking at him.

“Sell me a bottle of whatever he’s drinking,” the woman said, tossing a $100 bill on the counter. “Keep the change,” she added when he hesitated.

Getting into my room was a story in itself. I was able to stay on my feet with a little help from her, but I’d never have gotten the door open without her. The part where she put her hands in my pockets and found out where I kept my family jewels was the most memorable.

Once inside she got my clothes off faster than a chicken plucker could pluck a chicken. I felt downright stupid standing there stark naked with her dressed to the nines in an evening gown.

Why do they call it the “nines?” This gal would be an eleven on anyone’s scale. Her breasts alone were the things dreams are made of and her face belonged in Hollywood. I’m not all that big on eyes, but hers were something else. They were a very light blue and gave her a cool aloofness that was intimidating. Her height also took me aback. I’d thought she was wearing high heels, but she wasn’t. She was actually taller than me.

“Oh yes, you’ll do just fine,” she said, eyeing me like a cat eyes a mouse.

I covered my privates with my hands. I know it sounds silly, but I had my reasons. For one thing, enough booze can really screw up getting a good boner. And I’d passed the “enough” mark quite a while back. Second, she was scaring the hell out of me.

“Now I’ll undress you,” I said, trying to sound as macho as I could.

“I’m not sure I can wait that long,” she said, looking pointedly at my hands.

“That’s… I’m… ah…” I said.

“Don’t worry,” she said, and smiled.

Her smile damn near knocked my legs out from under me. How could anyone be so beautiful?

“Trust me. That’s not going to be a problem at all,” she said.

I stood swaying on my feet as she undressed. She turned away, looking back at me, and caressed her shoulder as she pulled the dress down over it. Turning back, she flicked a pink tongue over her lips as she cupped the exposed breast. The other breast soon followed and she bit her lower lip as she squeezed the nipples.

She was right. Old Mr. Softy wasn’t going to be a problem. Her show was starting to wake him up.

She kept turning until her back was to me again before letting her dress fall to the floor. The perfect view of her perfect ass made me want to rush over and rub my face on those soft cheeks, but I didn’t want to break the spell.

When she turned to face me again she had her hands much like mine had been, except they couldn’t quite do the job of covering what she had.

My legs gave out and I sat heavily on the bed. What she had was a very impressive erection.

“What’s the matter, baby? Do you need another drink?”

“Yeah, I think I do,” I said.

She brought the bottle, but brushed my hand away when I tried to take it. Instead, she held it close to my mouth with her dick nearly as close.

When I leaned forward to take a sip she pulled it back, dribbled a little on her cock and said, “There you are.”

My eyes went wide. She’d put her cock in my mouth so smoothly I wasn’t sure how she’d done it. Her free hand rested on the back of my head, keeping me from pulling back, and the little thrusts of her dick in my mouth were interspersed with more booze trickled onto her dick.

It was surreal. I was lapping like an obedient dog, unsure how to stop the indignity of what she was doing and not even sure I wanted to.

She was making a low, guttural purr of pleasure. She set the bottle down and held my head with both hands.

My hands shot up and pushed against her hips. She was getting too excited and the thrusts into my mouth getting too aggressive.

“Yes, yes, fight me,” she hissed.

Her cock hit the back of my throat and I gagged. Franticly I tried to push her away, or at lease turn my head, but her lust strengthened hands held me firm as she fucked my mouth.

She pulled hard, buried my face in her belly, and searing pain hit me as her massive cock plunged down my throat.

Strength came from somewhere, and I broke free in a wild explosion.

“Oh God am I ready,” she said.

Veins bulged out all over her cock, the head looked almost purple, and any resemblance to a mere “erection” would be absurd.

“Ready” was a gross understatement.

I tried to scramble to the other side of the bed, but she dragged me back. I struggled, not sure what she was trying to do, but soon realized she was forcing me face down on the bed.

She succeeded.

Pressed down by her weight I could feel her huge cock pressed against the crack of my ass. Squirming just seemed to get her more excited, so I concentrated on tightening my ass-cheeks as much as I could.

She hooked her feet inside my ankles, and with her knees over and outside mine, she slowly opened my legs.

“I want this to be good for you too,” she whispered in my ear once she had me spread.

Pressing my head down to keep it from moving, she held a tiny purple bottle under my nose.

“This will help you enjoy it much more,” she said.

It smelled awful. It was sickly sweet in a chemical sort of way and I thought I was going to puke.

But she was right.

It hurt when she entered me, but it felt good too. The way she had her arms around me, arms up and pinned to my chest like a Thanksgiving Day turkey, I wouldn’t have been able to get free anyway, but the warmth of her body on my back, her breasts pressed against my back, and the cock sliding in and out of my ass filled me in more ways than one. Weird as it sounds, I was enjoying it and the pleasure I was giving her.

As she got closer, the fucking got wilder. I felt like a rag doll owned by a psycho kid. The noises I was making must have sounded like a little girls by the time she deposited her massive load deep in my bowls.

“You’re a great fuck,” she said. “I’m going to remember this for a long time.”

“Me too,” I gasped.

Asphyxia8489
08-06-2007, 01:10 AM
OMG DUDE! Awesome!
Well, all of them have been good so far! My favorite was the Cindy rape one.

Claps hands!

ZingerIX
08-06-2007, 03:06 AM
when will this thing start?

admin
08-06-2007, 10:53 AM
Thanks for participation!

We begin voting, it will last 10 days!
Story that gets the maximum number of votes will be drawn and posted on site SheAniMale.com and ours board!

Good luck!

Lover
08-06-2007, 03:20 PM
I give my voice to Vegetunks :poll:

Asphyxia8489
08-06-2007, 03:49 PM
I give my voice to Vegetunks :poll:
Haha, Are you mad? My story was aweful!

My vote goes to dhenshaw for his The San Francisco Vamp story

Lola
08-08-2007, 09:52 AM
Happy Anniversary, Darling ;)

dhenshaw
08-08-2007, 02:26 PM
Crap, crap, and double crap.

If only I’d paid attention!

The winner gets his story DRAWN!

C-R-A-A-A-A-A-P!

If I’d known I would have put everything into Blue Eyes.

Imagine it, a beautiful she-male gets totally straight guys into her room.
[First picture: Macho guy bringing sexy babe into the bedroom.]

At the moment a homophobe would bolt for the door he’s zapped by a tattoo with hypnotic power.
[2nd pic.: Guy gawks openmouthed at the eyes tattooed on her lower belly. The upper part of a good-sized cock is visible as she’s pulling down her dress.

Next he’s shocked to have a large cock in his mouth.
[3rd pic.: His eyes pop wide open and it looks like the jig is up. No way in hell is he going to put up with this shit.]

But it’s too late!
[4th pic.: She’s pulled his face into her belly. His eyes are lost in the hypnotizing tattoo eyes. He is eye to eye with them, and there’s a cock down his throat.

She increases her power over him.
[5th pic.: While fucking his mouth she has one hand holding the back of his head and the other hand cupping his ear. It’s obvious she’s giving him a hypnotic suggestion.

She shows him how helpless he is.
[6th pic.: He’s on his back on the bed, arms at his sides as if held by invisible bonds, yet hands clawing and body arched. Unconcerned, she is sitting on his face (forwards sit, not facing his feet) and calmly dabbing Vaseline on her cock as he struggles for air.

She gets him ready.
[7th pic.: Now face down, arms still pinned to his sides, she’s using his balls to lift him up so she can stuff pillows under his middle. Her cool look shows total indifference to his discomfort]

She enters him.
[8th pic.: Getting her big cock into his tight hole is taking some effort. You can see his ass-hole stretched around the head of her cock, and he’s lifted his head and chest well off the bed at the intrusion.

She goes deeper.
[9th pic.: Half of her big cock is in him, and he’s gone from an arched back to a bowed back with his butt tucked defensively. His gritted teeth are testament that he’s never done this before.

She gives him a good fucking.
[Pictures Number 10 through 20 and the 5 min animation show her screwing him until the hypnotic effects convince him that he really likes it, and they live happily ever after]

The End.


Take a guess which story hasn’t gotten a single vote.

Yup, Blue Eyes Crying.


CRAP, shoulda, woulda, coulda.

Asphyxia8489
08-08-2007, 03:30 PM
There is always next time dude

Dilan
08-09-2007, 05:30 PM
I voted for "Happy Anniversary, Darling" - ZingerIX
It's story has liked me most of all :thubs_up:
I wish to see its drawn :bravo:

dhenshaw
08-11-2007, 06:54 AM
It don’t look like I’m going to win no writing contest, but I write a lot better than I draw.

Unfortunately, that ain’t saying much.

Nonetheless, there’s always a chance someone will enjoy my attempts at smut, and it don’t feel right to just hang around without trying to contribute something.


Hope you enjoy:


The Flesh Prison.

“It’s just a fucking vibrator,” I said.

“Not just a vibrator, it’s a Hitachi Magic Wand. This thing makes men obsolete,” she shot back.

I was pissed. Our first night she told me she was kinky, but I hadn’t got laid.

Next time she mentioned she was “Kind of Bi,” but I went home with blue balls anyway.

She was blowing me off on our third date even though I’d got my finger in her pussy, so I asked; “What’s the deal, Cindy?”

“My friend is getting back tomorrow and we like to do guys together. You don’t have any hang-ups about that kind of stuff, do you?”

“No,” I said.

I would have said more, like “Oh, thank you God,” or “I’d give my right arm for a threesome,” but my throat was too dry and my pulse was thumping.

Now it was my big night and her friend was apparently an oversized vibrator.

Still, she was a babe, and if I didn’t get laid soon I’d be humping the mannequins down at Cal’s Fashion Boutique.

Cal really hates it when I do that.

“She’s here,” Cindy squealed when the doorbell rang.

“Holy shit, “ I muttered.

Cindy was hot, but her friend was awesome. Her features looked somewhat Asian, but everything else looked like pure Hollywood porn. Tall, slender, jugs the size of melons and legs that went on forever. Her dress was definitely Asian, the clingy sheer kind that started at the floor and followed the slit up the side right up over her hips. Panties would ruin the effect of an outfit like that, and her effect had my knees wobbling.

I had plenty of time to notice everything because she and Cindy were eating each other’s tongues.

“This it the guy I was telling you about,” Cindy said.

“Oh, Cindy,” she sighed, “you always find me the prettiest boys.”

They went into another lip-lock while I pondered her “prettiest boys” crack.

“Do you have everything ready?”

“Yes,” Cindy said.

“Are you wearing those special panties I gave you?”

I craned my neck trying to see when Cindy hiked up her dress to show her.

“I think your friend wants to see them too,” she said.

“I guess its time we gave him a good look,” Cindy said.

With that, they came toward me, Cindy pulling her up and over her head, and her friend untying the silk strips that held her dress together.

With well-practiced moves Cindy wrapped her legs around my head and pulled my face up into her crotch.

Her friends dress fell away at the same time and I saw a monster cock swing out from between her legs.

It didn’t smell like pussy down there, it smelled like ether. When I tried to pull away, a second, stronger pair of hands held my head in place.

I woke up tied spread-eagle face down on the bed. The two of them were making out until they noticed I was back.

The words, “We like to do guys together” came back to me.

The she-male lifted my head so Cindy could slide her ass under my face. She held her cheeks apart, pushed back hard enough to make my neck hurt, and lowered herself onto her Hitachi Magic Wand.

“I’m ready,” she said, breathlessly.

My legs were spread so wide that the first thing I felt was the hot head of her cock on my ass hole.

My muffled objections brought a giggle from Cindy and a bounce of her ass made my head nod “yes.”

Forcing the head of her cock in made me to yelp, but when she said, “Dose that hurt?” Cindy swung her hips back and forth making me shake my head, “no.”

Lying on my back she forced the rest of her cock into me. As she fucked me the motion made my face ride up and down in Cindy’s ass. The Hitachi Magic Wand was so powerful I could feel the vibrations through her soft flesh.

I squirmed inside my prison of flesh. A hot poker filled my insides, the she-male hugged the breath out of me as her pumping cock set my pooper on fire, and Cindy’s wildly gyrating ass trapped my face.

Every nerve in my body was sending crazy messages to my brain, and my brain was sending back the strangest one of all.

It was telling my dick, uselessly pinned under me, that this was great sex.

In fact, I was closer to coming than either of my tormentors. All I needed was a little friction on my throbbing hard-on and I’d blow a massive wad.

That’s when the worst torment of all started. Somehow they both knew I was close to coming, they were even giggling about it. But the way I was tied and the way they were using me I just couldn’t get there.

The straps holding me must have been made of steel, because the way I was yanking, twisting and pulling, only steel could have withstood.

My struggles were turning them on even more, but I didn’t care. A drowning man couldn’t have wanted air more than I wanted to get a nut at that moment.

“I’m cumming,” the she-male cried.

She started slamming into me so hard I thought her cock would burst out the top of my head.

As if it had flipped a switch for Cindy, she promptly went nuts too. My neck made little popping sounds as it was twisted this way and that during her orgasm.

Both lay spent afterwards with little spasms of sexual aftershocks the only signs they were awake. I remained enveloped by them, almost in tears with frustration trying to cum.

“Are you ready for the blow-job yet?” Cindy said.

“I will be soon enough if he’s any good,” the she-male answered.

When they changed places I was presented with the cock that had just been in my ass.

“Make it good for me and Cindy will make it good for you,” the she-male said.

Cindy’s soft hands were now holding my prick, and they couldn’t have been half as surprised when I opened my mouth as I was.

They worked well together. Cindy kept me on the very edge while her she-male friend used my mouth to get ready again. Their timing never faltered. As the first stream of cum shot out of my cock, a hot glob of spume exploded in my face. She got me in the eyes on her second shot, then put her cock in my mouth to empty the rest. I was amazed she still had that much, and even more surprised when she used her hand over my mouth and fingers on my throat to make me swallow it all.

Asphyxia8489
08-11-2007, 02:10 PM
You know that the compotition entry is over right? Otherwise, damned good story as usial :)

dhenshaw
08-12-2007, 09:34 PM
You know that the compotition entry is over right? Otherwise, damned good story as usial :)

Thank you.

I know it’s over, but this is the only place to put a story.

Short stories are neat places for a moment of fantasy, to let your mind wander into forbidden territory or even get a couple of new ideas.

Any chance we could have a short story section?

You might want to limit stories to 500 or 800 words so blowhards like me won’t write huge novels.

If it was possible to rank each story after it was read the powers that be around here might check out the ones that garnered positive results. They might even be inspired to cherry-pick thoughts from one here and one there to come up with an instant classic.

If this idea tweaks anyone’s interest, there should only be three votes for a story:

3 point vote = Worthy of jacking off

2 point vote = Not bad, but…

1 point vote = This one blew chunks

Asphyxia8489
08-13-2007, 01:54 AM
Yeah I think a user storys forum would be awsome *sends PM to admin*

but then again we need alot of new forums. A live action one would be great. Futanari lesbians 3 is a awesome live action futa (not shemale)

Little Bee
08-14-2007, 02:58 PM
"Happy Anniversary, Darling" is in the lead!
I'll hope that this history will win! :beer:

Asphyxia8489
08-14-2007, 03:01 PM
Woah little bee, where you beeeeeen?

admin
08-17-2007, 10:24 AM
We are glad to announce that “Best Story” contest is over!

According the results of voting the winner is ZingerIX with his story named "Happy Anniversary, Darling" that gained 44% of votes.

:salute_l:We congratulate ZinerIX:salute_r:

Special set will be drawn according to his story and you will be able to see it both on our forum and SheAniMale.com

Asphyxia8489
08-17-2007, 12:43 PM
Congrats ZingerIX, You earned it

Lover
08-17-2007, 03:34 PM
My congratulations! Your history is worthy victories!

ZingerIX
08-19-2007, 07:15 AM
Awesome!!!

NIce to find out I won the competition on my birthday.

Woo-Hoo!!!

Asphyxia8489
08-19-2007, 10:49 AM
Awesome!!!

NIce to find out I won the competition on my birthday.

Woo-Hoo!!!
Congratulations and Happy Birthday :)

ZingerIX
08-22-2007, 06:26 AM
Waiting for the next competition.

What will it be?

Asphyxia8489
08-22-2007, 12:30 PM
Only one way to find out.

Wait

admin
08-29-2007, 01:35 PM
Now, as we promised, you can see the set drawn using winner story
both in this thread: http://animephilia.com/winner-best-story-competition-t235.html
and on SheAniMale (http://sheanimale.com).

naffnaff
09-09-2007, 06:24 AM
new contest coming upp soon?

Asphyxia8489
09-09-2007, 11:35 AM
new contest coming upp soon?
No idea, sorry, maybe a few more months

AnimeAngel
09-10-2007, 05:20 PM
I think one or two weeks ;)

juanrcuellar
09-15-2007, 04:18 AM
hi can still post an story for the contest or it is over?

Asphyxia8489
09-15-2007, 05:53 AM
It's over, sorry,
But you can post the story in the storys forum anyway if you want

darshan
10-15-2007, 05:10 AM
these all were amazing stories

CarrionMan19
10-23-2007, 10:08 AM
Damn it, I knew I should've signed up earlier! I had a good idea as well

Asphyxia8489
10-23-2007, 01:35 PM
Dont worry, we'll have another one some time in the near future

CarrionMan19
10-24-2007, 03:16 AM
Great, I'll be waiting for it

Name_Is_Z
10-28-2007, 05:16 PM
hm....when is the next story competition?...i want to have a go at it :rolf::)

WantonHentai
02-05-2008, 05:02 AM
yeah cuz i can write

beach-mom
02-16-2008, 01:22 AM
I have a real story of what happend to me in the Keys with a transsexual lesbian, but I'll save it till this thread re-opens again.
If curious PM me why??

Kisses beach mom

zomghaxorsloveanime
02-21-2008, 07:22 AM
i loved all these stories. too bad i didnt get to vote

yogexo
03-31-2008, 03:21 AM
Very good idea.

bruisedcock
05-06-2008, 02:27 AM
all were awesome stories!!!

mikelike
05-21-2008, 08:17 AM
Honestly an orginal idea:love:

teferi66
07-25-2008, 06:53 AM
congrats on winning

doctorf
09-02-2008, 12:50 PM
i would love to veiw all of the stories

BOYINPINKDIAPERS
09-10-2008, 03:24 AM
i like happy anniversary

LuigiSX
10-04-2008, 05:40 PM
sweet thats really neat

Posey
11-12-2008, 07:56 AM
I liked his description of the hott gurls cock...

Ishawesome
11-16-2008, 01:41 AM
Happy Anniversery Darling! :bravo:

does it happen every month? :love:

newthrill
02-01-2009, 07:42 AM
for the next story competition, i have an early vote for 'beach-mom in the keys'

poopoo126
04-09-2009, 01:58 AM
these are all really good.

lizhiqian
12-03-2009, 07:35 AM
i'm newbie!hahhah

curiosity
12-19-2010, 11:30 PM
great stories from there I will continue translating other

flameboyfiee
03-13-2011, 08:03 AM
i like it looks cool

Ciciarampa
05-30-2011, 11:57 AM
they all were awesome stories!